If I were to kiss you,
I'd kiss you beneath falling snow.
Because kissing in the rain well...
let's just say it's become cliche.
Tiny white snow fragments
touch and tickle your nose.
Your eyes grow bigger and wider,
we fall backward onto the cushion.
This is another form of affection
to display.
Anywhere to have you whisper my name,
to not kiss me would be in vain.
If I were to kiss you,
affections would behold before you.
Holding you close to me
as if you were inside me.
(In a manner of speaking of course.)
Mouths parted with eyes shut
don't dare to take a peak.
Savor the piece of chocolate cake,
touch my lips so seductive.
In a list
A contest entry
- Give Me A Kiss! by theredcatjazzoflove.
400 points, ended August 4, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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sexy, sensual...how lovely and if I must say mouth watering too...smiling
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still wonderful. Romeo, I tell ya
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If I were to kiss you,
I'd kiss you beneath falling snow.
Because kissing in the rain well...
let's just say it's become cliche.
adorable! Congratulations of your gold! AWESOME
welldeserving too. Funny, sexy, and oh so tempting
jin
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awww this is beautiful. i have been kissed in rain, sun, and snow lol but im sure being kissed in the snow by you would be much more amazing! congrats on the gold, it was well desered!
xoxo- christina -
ooh, I love this.
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yes you have already proved my friend..that your kiss not only an art piece but it is the Gold worthy kiss..wonderful immages you put..
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cake sounds good even though guilt would ensue
i like this
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good,well DUH,otherwise it wouldnt have won
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Oh! look! you got a nice shiny gold trophy!! you must be a really good kisser.. good for you!!! now kiss me in the snow
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artist this is a very very great poem here may i add you brought 5 things to the poetry dinner table that impressed me you did a great job good luck to you in the contest marvelous
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ah a very romantic piece :] yes the 'kissing in the rain' has become quite a cliche, so good job changing that and making it more original ! lol an all around great piece :] i love the last stanza- chocolate cake <3
lol great job and good luck in the contest !
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Wow. Speechless. Loved the last two lines. Give me some chocolate cake . How tasty your lips sound mayn! Give me a kiss haha! Great write, with a cheeky end. Good luck in the contest!
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awsomess
i think this is really sweat i just wish that this will happen 2 me 1 day. the ironie about this is though that i love snow and i hate getting soked lolz this is awsome keep up the great work!
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You are gorgeous
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Wow! ok I lose..Lol. you can have yourself a and the strait jacket back..Lol.. this is really amazing.. I really loved this..I've never been kissed in the rain! and now that I think about it, it is very cliche!..lol. But i've never been kissed in the snow either.. Man I'm like a virgin!
lol.. I meant in kissing You did such a wonderful job.. This was really sweet and beautiful.. Best of luck.
Angel
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awe, very tender thoughts for a first kiss. Very nice my friend.
Michelle
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