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Waiting for

Waiting for him,
          Should I be?








                        Impatiently waiting for love,


But did I lose it?


Should I wait?

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  • Claudia
    August 5, 2008
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    I dont think so.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Stupendous

    I loved this piece. It made me feel things...You don't always lose when you hold out for love. Great write. I enjoyed the read. ~mandie~