i can say i am sorry, in
many languages
but wont help or even
resolve the issues
i can get on my knees and
beg for your forgiveness
but the lingering consequences
of my misdeeds
will never bring happiness
back, to me and you, to us
brutally i abused our love
and broke you heart
memories lingering deep
down our minds
but damn, we are still apart
my evil deeds and actions
stains upon our hearts and minds
the greatest love i ever had
did slip away like a lime
i stripped you of your happiness
your kindness i took for granted
but your love i adored
and in my heart
it shall always be and it
is where it will nest
i only wish, that i could
get a second chance
just to say how much i love
you and you were my best
Author notes
love can bring some pain from time to time, and sometimes it can bring unmeasureable happiness and memories so lovely that they make you feel like in heaven, well this is one of those moments. hope yall like it.
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Where the line lies is not always clear. Sometimes we don't see it until we've crossed it. Sometimes we see it just in time. Sometimes we never see it and keep on going. And sometimes we see it and continue on willingly. Great write about love lost. Forgiveness isn't always forgiving. In the beginning of the poem, you did a great job in the hopelessness and uselessness of all you could do to try to amend the situation. It seems that in this case, all you could do couldn't fix what was broken. Thank you for sharing.
--Genesis.
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Genesis
you are absolutely right about the line that people are so incosidrate about, and honestly I believe that if one loves you no matter what you do, they will always sit and solve the issue with you, but sometimes it feels like it is all about them, and you are never thought of in any way, if only they could undersatdn that feelings are the same, and pain endured is completely no difference to both sexes, lol thank you though and I appreciate the cooment
god bless,
***thelegend***
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