Falling in Love it seems like a dream
I feel Butterflies floating deep within
As I gaze upon your eternal soul
Your love for me seems to unfold
Your precious smile make’s things right
As you heart warms even in the coldest nights
My eyes tinkle like the brightest star
I feel you close no matter where you are
If this is love let it never end
I could never see you just like a friend
I want you for an eternity
For me to love you and you love me
Falling in Love it seems like a dream
I feel Butterflies floating deep within
Please tell me what you think
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great
I really enjoyed this poem I think its well written emotionally packed and flows very nice also a great length not to short but not to long . It also makes me very mad as I'm in a failing frustrating painfull relationship I would much rather be feeling the emotions in this poem its a nice mental escape thanks for sharing.
Ry
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Wow, you put through a lot of love and brought it out beautifully. You did a wonderful job. you scored anotehr perfect 55!
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thats an amazing poem right there ^^^
i love the way you describe love and your feelings. its beautiful
keep it up
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Wow I'm speechless
You've capture everything I ever felt and still feel for my husband, such a beautiful poem I wish I could express love in poems. talented and inspirational -
Beautiful.
Isn't love great? The words expressed here were of those who definitely fell in love. Good one, Mom.
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