Hatred is a gift of God; go on use it,
Bitter like lemon; firmly squeeze it.
I hate my cat since she’s broken my antique porcelain
I used to like her, but now I treat her with disdain.
It was in the kitchen, where it all began,
I noticed her gnawing on a cheese flan,
She startled, as soon as she caught my sight,
I ran after her, she too sprinted with fright!
She whizzed across the kitchen floor,
and cunningly escaped through the flap door,
She crossed over the hurdles like an athlete,
I failed to grab her, she was fast on her feet.
All over the house, I chased her around,
down went the Vase, it crashed to the ground.
I was tormented, my every attempt did fail,
Plan-B; I dodged her, she was caught by her tail.
I yelled out foul language and threw tempered tantrum,
Slapped her endlessly, like a pendulum’s fulcrum,
Kicked her out of the door; stupid four legged canine,
Rap of unrhymed swear-words followed the swine.
Author notes
Though the contest is for the new poems, I've used a few stanzas from a pre-written poem that I wrote a few years back, but the rest is new... hope it's okay, if not then please feel free to remove it from the contest...
The subject of hatred is a "Cat"
Photograph with the courtsey of "Photosearch"
A contest entry
- Come on Lovely Poets! Let Your Hatred Come Out With Cruel Passion by Leaving Today.
465 points, ended August 19, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hahah..now I enjoyed this and I could see you running around the place to catch the cat. A warm read...very nice! Take care.
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lol. How dare you treat a CAT like that? BAd!! shamee on you
lol. And hey, lemon is not bitter. I love lemons 
i eat em yummm and i adore them and i love them 
I liked your poem lots, you are good at puting humour in your poetry. 
Best of luck in contest!
Lonely
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Dolly, I was only pretending... but Lemon is bitter for sure... this url proves it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cW3z70WMCTg&feature=related
mina
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He he he.. cats are to be loved ... not for hatred sweetooo... one of my friend had a cat who killed and ate a bird, the cat was punished severly this poem is cute and you have done great while mixing in some old stanzas!! Good luck
-Neha
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Sweetoo, I couldn't think of any human being that I hate, so I chose a Cat
I love animals...
mina
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