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♥ Loves Creation ♥

Trace my body with your lips,
Make me quiver with each touch.
I crave to feel your kiss,
The bliss is just to much.

So rough, scratches on your back,
Each act so filled with passion.
You hold me close and taste my breath,
My body is relieved of all tension.

Your fingers deep inside me,
You know what it is I want.
Our eyes meet and I feel so free,
As you nibble, tease and taunt.

Give it to me slow,
Make me beg for it.
lick the juices that flow,
Drink up every bit.

Now it's my turn to please,
I start my way down.
As I fall to my knees,
And begin to go to town.

Taking you in deep,
All the way in.
I feel your candy start to seep,
And drink you up yet again.

So ready now, I drip with desperation,
I see love in your eyes as you do in mine.
Enjoying every moment of our loves creation,
We lay there wishing it to last till the end of time.

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  • ckwriter69
    July 30, 2008

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    wonderful erotic write. Nothing like making hot love with your man. Expressed very well. In the last stanza you have a misspelling... perspiration? instead of deasperation? Anyway thanks for sharing your lustful write and keep writing.


    • Bruised.Roses
      July 31, 2008
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      thanks so much glad you liked it and for bringing the mispelling to my attention