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Tonight and Forever

I miss the way you smile at me and the way you cal my name

I miss the way our lips would meet half way up the stairs

I miss the way your smile would warm me up inside

come home tonight and forever be mine again

I want to hold you safe in my arms and tell you its OK

I want to show you the world and put it in our hands

my love for forever deep Will rain down upon you for heaven sweet

so please come back into my arms tonight and forever i ask

that you ......... be
mine

be truthfull do you like it.

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  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    Good

    Nice love poem hope he comes back, however if he does not there are others this won't be your last You've done a wonderful job here. Execution is great flows well . The Lines have Vision and maintain continuity of the thought Well done
    Keep what the good work.


    • death-raab
      August 1, 2008
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      thanks and there is a new guy i wrote this in a notebook a few years back about my ex tj