Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Scars of Freedom

Who I am, has changed,
Yet I'm still the same.
It's like I've been caged,
The animal's been tamed.

Still I battle on,
Struggle to calm the beast.
Wonder if I'm right or wrong,
Or if I care at least.

Inside was numb and empty,
I longed and ached to feel.
Voices calling out to me,
Not allowing me to heal.

Screaming in my mind,
To the demons I sucome.
Giving in I loose what I tried find,
By imprisoning life I scar my freedom.

Author notes

this poem describes the changes i've gone through and the battle to continue on as the better person rather then giving in to past pain

In a list

what you think?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Donna
    August 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    good stuff

  • Donna
    August 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    from recovering addict 'one day at a time'
    things do get better 'keep the faith