breathe
outward
to feel me;
disembodied
spirits meld, aware
only of their heartbeats
coalesced in crescendo...
for distance cannot encumber
two souls intent on becoming one:
each moment, our lives align to converge
Author notes
I joined this site on July 21, 2003. Five years now! 
I can hardly believe it myself.
This is my latest, accompanied also by the earliest poem I posted on this site, "Hardship Avenue". (I have no clue where the first poem I ever wrote disappeared to--but it is probably better off forgotten, my writing was crap in seventh grade!)
Hope your writing years are still going strong--it seems mine are diminishing...
~love always, little sister 
Raven Aurora (Almighty Aphrodite)
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So fitting that you come back carrying such a darkly glistening etheree.
Know that we have missed you, and your verses.
I hope you are well in this difficult world.
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You adding poems to this site may have slowed but your talent is in no way diminishing. It is not easy to write an etheree. You make the form look easy. This one is somewhat sad but sheds a light on the possibility of two people joing as one. EXCELLENT!
No need to add your name to "Hardship Avenue". I now know who you are Love! Thank you for this entry dear little sister and I wish you all the best.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Awesome!
Hey Raven, you still got the midas touch and this poem proves it without a doubt. It's been a long time and I am happy to have read your poem. I know what it's like to feel like your writing has diminished. Mine has been diminished for quite some time now. I only wish I could write as half as well as you can. Many blessing to you and God bless little sister. /Avril
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aphie three years ago I joined this site...I read your poems...and called you poet...you say you lost your roost...I say...this etheree presented still tells me you have that touch...by the way...I wrote my frist etheree because of you...and invented my own acrostic/etheree right here on AP...oh..a love poem sensual in content...seems to be looking me in the eyes...and you say you cant write one...hey girl...you still shine for me Poet...
Mally
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BEAUTIFUL
I have just started to write again time and place I guess for everything .I really liked this one .
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I dont think your writing is diminishing, you just are lazy
and dont write anymore. Shame Shame Raven you know I love you and I think this is a beautiful poem.
I joined June 27, 2003 right around the same time as you my beautiful sister. xoxo
Criss
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