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Take me baby, or leave me...

You've said time and time again,
"Oh baby, I love you,
Oh baby I need you!"
My suggestion to you is try showing it,
My suggestion to myself should be stop caring,
And I've tried to ignore your passionate ways,
But I find your lips so kissable,
An I can't resist your charm,
So take the choice,
Take me baby, or leave me...

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Honest opinions please XD

Option Five.

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  • righteousme
    July 31, 2008

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    it was an interesting take on the prompt offered... a little choppy but overall a great read... thank you so much for your time and talent...