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Never Truly Gone

Here lies a woman
Who gave all but
never requested anything in return
Who put her heart into every little thing she did
She fought for everything she accomplished
She loved with all her heart, never protecting it from pain
To bad it wasn't enough and from this world she had to part

Daughter Sister Friend

That which is remembered is never truly gone

Author notes

its myself and its option 1 but i dedicate it to Laynha Beth Meyers my best friend may she rest in peace.

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  • toomysterious
    August 5, 2008

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    Beautiful words here and a fitting epitaph for those of us who give too much and die of broken hearts. Congratulations on the silver.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 5, 2008

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    I think that it's honourable what you have done & you sound somewhat like me in respects. Very beautiful epitaph.