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Inside the falling dust

Workers complete the single task

day to night to day

In work shoes she doesn’t swivel

as she walks
         
Past rivet machines and presses

with die cast plates

Checking joined backs and linings

Though her flushed face raised in

a mischievous grin, will show a

warm soul

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  • dame de la riviere
    July 30, 2008

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    you depict humanities intricacies so nicely...like a quiet observer of the spirit. i like the details, the industrial details coupled with human in the grin. nicely done. , Dannie