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○•♥•○.I Will Always Love You.○•♥•○

you really was the love of my life
i told you everything
i trusted you so much
you was my first true love
and nothing can ever change that
i loved everything about you
from your smile
to your big brown eyes
you was so cute
i loved you
yes, you sometimes pissed me off
but i loved you so much
that i seen past all of your flaws
we're not together anymore
but i still love you so much
nothing will ever change that
the last thing i heard you say was...
you don't think that we can ever be together again
it hurt me so bad
to hear you say that
you never called me again after that
i think about you every day
you come to me in conversations
with my mom and my friend
everything seemed to remind me of you
like all the good and all the bad times we had
when you stopped calling
i felt so many emotions
it went from sad, to hurt then a hate
but i can't hate you
we are'nt together
but i still love you so much
you made me feel like you turned your back on me
like you stopped caring
and worse, stopped loving me
but you finally called me
it has been 2 months
it was suppose to be a prank call
but we ended up talking for hours
hearing your voice
made me just cry
thinking of all the things we've done together
the way you made me feel
you always made me laugh
you made me feel so pretty
you made me fell alive
and i thank you so much for that
i thought you were my one true love
but we did'nt last like i hoped
we moved along way too fast
but i still love you
as much as you made me mad sometimes
i still can't get over you
i love everything about you
i hope we can start talking again
not to be together
but to be close like old times
we may be far apart
and we may never date again
but you was my first love
no one can ever replace you
nothing can stop my feeling for you
i may be young and
some may call me naive
but i did and always will love you
no matter where life takes us
i wish for you the very best
i will always be here for you
and i'll support you 100%
for whatever you decide to do
you may not feel the same about me
as i do for you
but i hope that you still do
whatever happens, just know
i'll always be madly in love with you

Author notes

this is about my first love, Dillon. he ended up finally calling me last night July 30th. for the first time in 2 months. so yea.

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  • mylifeisempty
    December 17, 2008

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    very good job

    i like this one especially, it makes me think about my ex gf alot... it was the same situation.. you got alot of emotion in it and i like that....


  • WaterDragoon
    August 26, 2008

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    omfg!!!
    i love it i sense some emotion going on but i like the concept alot
    grat job
    ~Moonchild~
    *oh here is a real pic of me hope you like it enjoy


  • baby boy
    August 5, 2008
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    i like this poem it really came from the heart

  • WaterDragoon
    August 2, 2008
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    i feel alot of emotion this is really sad
    i like the poem
    meru


  • Dajuan
    July 30, 2008

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    love the degree of your emotion

    This poem show a depth of devotion, were love can't truly be distinguish. Your beautiful as articulate. Os I know Dillion see that,and whatever happens be best for you.


  • peregrin
    July 30, 2008
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    Oh, that is sweet, and kinda sad...
    I feel the emotion...
    Good job baby.

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