If you want to love me.
then you will need to be real
with me..you need to truely love me..
If it's my heart you want to steal,
then dear, you just need to be real.
I don't want to make you unhappy..ever.
I just want love that's true.
I need to heal from some of
my past pain.
before I get into love
again.
So, I want to take it slow..
to be sure that you'll never go
I've been hurt too much in my life.
I've had lots of tears and lots
of strife.
I don't want any pain..
where my tears fall like rain.
If you really love me, and
you think you can be true,
then,I think I could really
go for you in a big way!
So, go ahead and make my day!
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Only one can give such love.
God; but first we must learn to love him in our hearts.
The moment we deviate we get lost in Maya where we scumb to passion and frictious love.
Real life(Maya) always hurts like cupid shooting arrows.
Congrats
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The truest love is God's love.If a couple both love God and keep Him in their relationship as number 1, then they can have mtrue love..I believe this!
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Great Job...
This is a very real write...i like it a lot...for some reason at first it didnt seem to flow..but you tied it in all very well...i love the ending it is very impactful...keep up the good work...
~:~Tiffany~:~
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Thanks ! I am happy nthat you enjoyed this poem! God bless you!
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