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Sweet Oasis

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        I yearn for that sweet oasis
        which turns me inside out

        and soothes my soul

        sending me over the edge of cliffs

        spiraling the great vortex

        into octaves of bright red

        as I tuck in my outstretched wings

        freefalling toward the earth

        I become entangled

        in the web of your being

        hungrily searching your lips

        until we blend as one

 

 

 

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  • TXCowgirl
    August 13, 2008
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    Sweet oasis, what a great image with some great thoughts that come with it. Super title and even better ingredients to coincide with it all. You do this so well. This deserves more than an honorable but your words always shine brightly in my mind.
    TXCowgirl


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    Ooh this was so beautiful. Love the metaphor expressed and the passion instilled. Love the ending how you expressed "blending as one".. everything fell into place perfectly and you've created a masterpiece. Wonderful!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • sidewinder silver member
    August 9, 2008

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    those trysts shelters by a promise...
    where romance finds its delight in growing passion

    as th aroma of love finds its way ...abit at a time!


    yes My friend I did enjoy this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • PatPthebarefootpoet silver member
    August 7, 2008
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    Nice picture..nice poem. Simply a beautiful work again. My best to you in the contest!!


  • chasingtheday gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    a good poem penned, i think i am the opposite now lol i have been inside out for that long i need a break to rest the brain


  • wattle silver member
    July 31, 2008

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    I don't read enough, which is your fault; but that's not your fault. ---- I'm in love with the 'touch' and 'wonder' poetry. Thank you.


  • leo2 gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    The words describe the photograph perfectly. I'd be a rich man if I had a nickel for every time I had this dream. Good luck in the contest.
    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. It's so good to see you sharing your passion again.


  • stompsalot
    July 31, 2008

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    This is amazing! Just wonderful! You can really feel the "moment" of it! Awesome talented write! I especially love "as I tuck in my outstretched wings..." The imagery really moves me.
    Blessings and *stomps


  • xSarahx
    July 30, 2008

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    Wow this is awesome! I love everything about this! Good luck in the contest!


  • who iam
    July 30, 2008

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    Delightfully Warm

    That place where we all find "sustenance"
    "hungrily searching your lips until...
    Very well done.


  • NotAMolly
    July 30, 2008
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    that was very sensual and good! beautifully written.

  • ecrivain01
    July 30, 2008
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    This is an excellent job ...

    in every respect.


  • LionessK Greeters member
    July 30, 2008

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    Amazing as always Kimberly. Your words of love leave a... -sigh- sweet of daydreams.
    I wonder, what it must be like to be you... seriously. I admire your talent greatly.
    ♥

    ~Kristy

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