The moon;
bright as possibility
the night;
deep as the sea
I am rapt
with emotion;
and ecstasy.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended August 8, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #36 PICTURE INSPIRED (: by Walk-Free.
750 points, ended December 29, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"The moon;
bright as possibility"
great phrase.
thanks for this awesome job
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Wow. I loved the last 3 lines. Well done! Amazing work. Good luck to you in the contest.
Much love
Ylova
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Thank you. I'm so glad that you appreciated it.
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Question?
Did you rush this...?
It has promise and potential but feel that is has been thrown down on the canvas and not painted with love and admiration...
Sorry just a moment I had here on this page and nothing bad or maliscious meant.
Love and light
Simon
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I guess maybe I did rush it. It actually was someething I started a while ago, and I just pared it down a little bit.
Thank you for your comments.
Sincerely a sensation.
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