Between us is this gap, an empty void
Enter my bed and stay awhile
After youre here you wont want to leave
Undeniable how beautiful you really are
To you I am a stranger, but I long to become more
Id give anything for one night with you
Far away, Id do anything for you to see what I see when I look at you
Understanding, patience, and kindness will flood you
Love conquers all, for love is the most beautiful
A contest entry
- Beautiful Things by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended August 6, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - -♥-~*Beautiful*~-♥- by xwarriorXprincessx.
900 points, ended August 18, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
acrostic
Comments
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how i would love to get this feeling, a feeling of love, instant love.
'ar away, Id do anything for you to see what I see when I look at you'
amazing how people look so different through our eyes glazed in love than they think they do.
well done
x
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i would like to have it again....
yea tht is true. thanks 4 the comment
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this makes me miss being in a new relationship.
it is well wrote and i love the flow.
great write.
KNIGHT TIME
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awwwww, thank you
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oy. the tenderness becomes me.
this is so fluid and delicate. the tone of this piece is almost like a whisper... i could imagine someone whispering it sweetly to their mate whilst rolling around in the sheets like two reality-dazed lovers.
*sighs* beautiful.
points for making my heart hurt a little. thanks for that lol
(it's a good thing. i promise)
lovely lovely lovely.
best wishes and best of luck! -
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actually i have said this to sumone! awwww lol yay! thanks 4 the sweet comment
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So sweet and soft spoken, as if this voice can chase all trouble away. You are very good with words and emotions, and completely right by the way! That's what made this piece so enjoyable. Thank you for entering, and good luck!
~Cj
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awww thts cute. thank you so much, im glad u like it!
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Amazing write
this is a great write...it describes emotions that are normally hard to put in to words..."Love conquers all, for love is the most beautiful"...i love that line..keep up the great work...
~:~Tiffany~:~
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thank you so much, well 4 me putting stuff into words is easy lol expressing myself is the hard part.
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ok i LOVED this one xD
good job
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thank you hehe
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i like your take on the prompt, i didnt even notice it was an acrostic till i read that at the bottom, it flows nice and speaks deep, good luck in the contest and keep up the writing, ~your wifey
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thanks, lol thts funny.
glad u liked it
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