Desolation coats an enchanted forest,
::entombing my frozen soul::
as the full moon casts it's bluish tint.
The darkness falls on crystalized tree's
and illuminates my troubled past.
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::suffering::
::IN ENDLESS::
::Madness::
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Failure clouds the vision, thick with age
as hopelessness invades a shattered mind.
I long to find peace beneath the wind,
amongst the clouds that soar above my celestial grave.
Rusted blades cut the flesh of dissappointment and
salt the wounds that plead for life as
a brutalized heart breathes it's last breath.
Reddened trails intertwine on snowy flesh to
mark the battles i fought so hard to win,
fought so hard to rectify and now i sing my final tune.
Blood glitters and runs across a rooted, misty ground,
a bed of dirt and roses forever painted black with solace.
Beneath the surface of these crystal falls,
the eye's lie vacant of misery,
sorrow's washed in glistening crimson ||dying, decaying||
The pain became to much, angels betrayed,
the forest a safe haven from a tortured existance.
Black, feathered wings spread and splinter these drowning
thoughts as death waltz's with an infinite life.
::A note told all, a note in blood::
::thus, it seemed, the only way::
::no one cared, left unloved::
::i wished and wished the pain away::
The throat becomes an open tomb,
hands locked in endless prayer as purgatory
opens up beneath the ground.
A white, silken gown hangs from my body
decked in pearls, a dove sits patiently by my side.
My sins are cleansed as the bird takes flight
with my soul, a ray of light shining through
the gem-decked atmosphere.
||if only someone knew the hurt i felt||
||the pain i feel so deep inside||
||but now i fear it's come to late||
||as death lies dormant by my side||
Wolfish howls sound in the distance,
so peaceful, so beautiful, so far, far away
as the eye's find hope and
slide shut for eternal sleep.
"i'm so sorry..."
[||G O O D B Y E||]
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slightly long but a really fun "dark" write! unique, i can definitely see you put a lot of thought into this.
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haha,
thanks so much hun! ^_^
Yeah, when i first wrote it, it was very short. And then i kept going back and fixing, fixing, and then adding. haha, i finally decided to leave it alone and this is how it turned out!!!
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Once again another stunning and powerful piece. Different from your other ones but i love it all the same. You should be proud of this one.
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LOL
way different, NO MURDER, OR SERIAL KILLERS OR FEAR! HAHA, i didn't think i could do it! LMAO. I was in a different mood when i wrote this one and somehow it all just seem to flow. By far NOT MY BEST PIECE but still a semi-creative one all the same. This is my take on death and i was trying to pain a beautiful image at the same time.
thanks hun
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WOW WOW WOW
WOW INTENSE- full of emotion I'm speechless if I'm honest this poem of yours is a talented one. Aww made me cry, so much sadness. I can relate to cutting, your piece is such an inspiration. Your poetry is what does this site proud thankx for sharing it is a breath taker
take care
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Awwww.....
i'm soooo sorry you've had to struggle with the self-mutilation addiction. Unfortunately, that is EXACTLY what it is: an addiction. It's a hard one to stop. I haven't found a way to completely quit yet, but i don't do it NEARLY as much as i used to. I have some pretty eery looking scars.....but life DOES get better.
As rough as things may be right now, try to keep your head up. I don't know your story or what you have been through or why you cut, but i want you to know that if you EVER need to talk, feel free to message me!
oh yeah, haa, and thanks so much for your compliment on my poem! It really isn't all that great, but i tried to make it emotionally tense yet peaceful at the same time. Hopefully, it doesn't sound like i'm promoting suicide, it's just how i personally view death....
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Syn!!!! You took my breath away here!!! WOW!!! I would never have expected something so poetically profound from you!! I expect gore and horror but not the beauty that can be found in both in such a peaceful way....I absolutely freaking love this!!! The imagery you created was just awe inspiring and your word choice was brilliant!!! Very very very well done!!!
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wow, yet again another beautiful piece of work. you never cease to amaze me.
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BRILLIANT!!!!!!
WOW!! This was brilliant!!!! Fuckin awesome and descriptive words used throughout the whole piece and how you interpretted suicide in a creative manner with metaphors and pungent imagery. I'm utterly blown away by your composition once again, this was just a genius write. I loved the whole piece and I can't really pick my favourite part; meaning it was flawless! The ending was just perfect from the artistic imagery which sums up the poem. This is a masterpiece, I should be speechless, but I forced the words out for your honour
~Emily~ xx
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Wow......
lol. thanks soooo much for your enthusiastic reply. LOL. I'm actually honored that you like it since i think you're an amazing poet yourself ^_^
yeah,
i was in a wierd mood today (not suicidal) but that subject had been on my mind so i tried to create a dark atmosphere to go with the subject. I actually think this was a shitty piece though, it didn't come out how i wanted it to at all.....but aw well
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