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The Blue Jay




Soft white belly, anointed with

manifold pastel shades of blue,

turquoise gemstones


Richly accented with

bamboo charcoal; crested,

the blue jay

calls to prayer.


A contest entry

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  • Celticjedi
    August 5, 2008

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    Wow. The beauty of a simple thing in not so many words. A wonderful method to make people truly see. Excellent work. Keep this up! Thanks for entering, and good luck.
    ~Cj

  • Bad Bill
    August 1, 2008
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    Rich imagery and use of language and a pleasure to read. Very well done.

    Bill


  • Candy6
    July 30, 2008
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    Very good write. Nice imagery.