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Your Eyes

as i look into your eyes
no surprise
what lies in between them
is yearning for freedom
the veil that covers you smothers you
i've realized that as no one can help a caged bird fly
i cannot free you

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  • free2bfly
    August 12, 2008
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    thanx


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    Awww... The yerning the help but unable to can hurt so much.

    A wonderfull write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose