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In the mist.

A violent dream awakens me,
From slumber deep and true,
A bright light glows,
Beside my bed,
An angel whispers true.

She takes my hand and guides me,
Down the stairs and out,
And leads me with a purpose
To a sea aglow, at midnight.

Within the waves,a flash of white,
As they  rip and roar,
Crashing to the sand,
Where I stand alone once more.

I gaze with fear and intrigue,
As the waves grow tall and wide,
And in the mist I swear I see,
Many horses, all a brilliant white.

Upon there heads, are horns of silver,
There hooves are big and strong,
There faces torn in pain,
As they fight to save there souls.

A flash of red dives past me,
I turn to see it go,
A fiery bull,
Who circles and roars,
With a purpose, so evil, it hurts.

Then voices they rise,
Screaming with fight,
As they plead for salvation this night,
With tears in my eyes,
I jump up and cry,
Safe in my bedroom,
in the pure morning light.

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jossiemarie, Rock Soothes The Soul!

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  • tehzeeb
    August 4, 2008

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    Oh wow..
    great poem....I have so many descriptions from the poem in my head it's hard to see straight....~

    ~Tehzeeb~


  • dc 960
    July 30, 2008
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    i like it, it made me want to read more ...... well done!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    An Awesome Picture and your verses breathe life into it
    Well done & Best of Luck in the contest!