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Purple light

I am purple.
  I love purple.

You are green.
  I envy you.

He is red.
  He makes me mad.

She is blue.
  Get over it.

They are yellow.
  I am afraid of them.

We are black.
  I love light.

Yin is white.
  I love light.

Black is yang.
  God Damn yang.

I am purple.
  I love purple.

Author notes

I saw the contest. I saw the poem. They seemed to fit, but who knows. This one is inspired by Chris B., down in Tx, the first to introduce me to "i love purple" at "Atch A Fah Laya's" years ago. I've loved purple ever since.

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  • penman gold member
    January 16
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 3, 2008

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    Humm..what a thought to reveal the colors of the life and its impacts as well...Well done my friend..I love it..

    • Watuwant silver member
      August 13, 2008
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      Glad you enjoyed, PrabhuDayal. Again, thanks...
      peace
      doug


  • Providence
    July 30, 2008

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    Colorful word play with a much ddeper meaning...the colors of a prism...the waves of flowing light and ebbing darkness so effect our energies we've even used colors to describe our emotions!

    Wonderful work!

    Marianne

    • Watuwant silver member
      July 31, 2008
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      Thank you, Marianne. This was a fun one to write...
      peace
      doug

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