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The girl I used to know

There was this Girl
That I used to know
One that now I don't recognize
cheerful and smiley
A beliver
a forgiver
now sad and bitter
not the one I knew
not the shiney face
the eagerness to fight
the hope,the power
not there
not anymore
The one that was
broke like glass
she is someone I miss
that one I used to be
now am lost
can't recognize myself

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    August 1, 2008
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    Excellent!
    I know what that is like.. it's like looking in the mirror and being unable to see yourself or seeing someone else..
    Excellent poem yas Yasmina, one of your best!

    You should put a reward on it to get people to read it, it is worth the read.

    Keep on writing,
    Nooni