Soft warm flesh entwines with my own as our hands come together,
Tiny granules of sand sift between our bare toes with every step,
A vast expanse of midnight blue hangs above us, embellished by a million diamonds,
And with each roll of a wave a spray of water slowly falling onto land is all that can be heard.
There is no one here, just you and i, not that it would matter,
because here with you, walking along the beach after sunset is the most beautiful thing i know.
A contest entry
- Beautiful Things by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended August 6, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Gorgeous. You did a wonderful job on this. The only thing is grammar in the last section, remember to capitalize your 'I's. Other than that it's terrific! Thank you for entering and good luck!
~Cj
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thankyou so much for the lovely comment and the honorable mention, i really appreciate it!!
Much Love,
JJ x
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