I looked down she embraced me in arms
Felt warm breath her scented aroma sweet.
Ignited as her lips touched, deeply probing mine
Ecstasy tongues clashed she caressed, lashed.
Her trembling body loosened to my vibes.
Every nook and canny nudged as I indulged.
Softness overcame our passions in love
Kissing we clung to each other, as one.
Author notes
SKEM9 Layouts for the picture----
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie Pic Prompt; 10/60 by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended August 10, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow; a beautiful portrayal of unity in passion. I loved this. Your language was sensual yet written with class. You really caught my attention and this is something I could read over and over and never get tired. Amazing!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Had to reread it a few times because the lines ran sentences together. I liked it once I made sense of it, though. As arafura said, very sensual. Cheers.
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Thanks follow your advice
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Another sensual work from your pen poet. Excellent!
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Thank you with my heart.Your encouragement means a lot to me.
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