Sunburnt prism
Blinding eyes that stare
into the darkened mind
Author notes
well its 17 syllables but i saw that article and i dig the lack of 5/7/5 so yeah.
A contest entry
- 'ku 'ku cachoo --enter your haiku here :) by sailor ptolema.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 78 entries
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Comments
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solarfall is not a word. It should be 'solar fall'.
I like the sentiment behind this, but i think it's a bit to enigmatic and heavy on the poetic diction
. I'd like to see it describe a literal snapshot of life 
thanks for entering and g'luck.
-sailor ptolema
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