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For Weight

What do you do when words lose consciousness?

Standing for so long.

Reminders of those times,

The Strong and the Endless.



Where did they go?

An ashen figure lies motionless
as his world
fades  . . .

To
Step
Away
Is all that can save . . .

(You've been left behind)


You can try to be poignant.
Attempt to bleed your words.
You say what you do!

You wait . . .
        wait . . .
            wait . . .




And, in explanation,
All there is left

Is forgotten words on a page.

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  • Going Forever
    July 30, 2008

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    alright, i don't get this one either but oh well...i like to comment on other peoples work.

    but i like the way it is set out!