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Don't You Won't Do Not

Same frustrations.
Unrequited.
Unsettled.

Tomb stone.

You spend your life worrying about the iniquities
Unparalleled massacres occurring before your eyes.

Trucks drive by.

Sample some wine
Eat the brie

Fine

But don't say if you won't do.
It won't do.

You liar.

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  • Venus25
    July 31, 2008
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    Whoa


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 31, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Unquie, this seems to be like a pot bubbling anxious to boil over with emotions that seem to be locked up in words.
    Excellent write!

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    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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