Our world is a mirror.
Reflected past mistakes,
Become our new memories.
Time can't help to repeat oneself.
Humanity will never learn,
And will suffer for the arrogance.
Inconsolable hostilities scar us,
Leaving both emotional and physical pains.
Never can then mend,
From neither time nor help.
Help this far in,
Is worthless to the souls of the past.
Our oh so fragile world.
Must it have a crumbling point?
A weak spot,
In which when hit,
Life shall cease to exist?
Oops.
Times up.
My world has already been demolished.
Broken glass covers any hope of life,
Suffocating fumes implode,
Smothering any chance to live.
Everything lays in ruins.
Center of all surrounding chaos,
My body lay.
Pools of blood drip along the glass,
Spilling the precious Live Juice,
Glass stabbed through my skin.
Along with my dead world,
Went my soul,
My life,
My everything.
A contest entry
- Defeaning Silence [PROMPTS] by Demmy-Defect.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oooooooooh my goodness.....
This poem is... almost my mind on a page.
This is incredible....
Sorry, but it's rare I find something this perfectly matched to my way of thinking.
I think this goes without saying... amazing write.
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just what i was looking for
you've good taste in writing. ^.^ i really liked your word choice in this.... finally my contest shall get interesting! i thank you for entering and wish you luck
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...i don't know if i got it right but my heart is somehow pat in your words here..so nice and makes me think...thanks!
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aww absolute sadness! great write
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