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Sweet Dreams




staccato sighs rush past
tongue moistened lips
shivers slide across skin
cool breezes from open window
mingle with sweet heat
rising from dancing fingers






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  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    July 30, 2008

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    Man...i loved that you write very vividly and it's absolutely wonderful. i loved your poem. well done.


    • Harlequin Bunny
      July 30, 2008
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      Thank you for the kind comment .. always appreciated!
      Personally, I'm all about expressing things in as few words as possible .. though, people who have ever held an actual conversation with me would laugh at the thought of me not wanting to use frivolous and un-necessary words .. Most of them say I talk too much.
      Thanks, again.

      • Rain-Shot-Rose
        July 30, 2008
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        well being short, sweet, and to the point has worked for various situations of expression. and i think only few can do it...and you are one of em. as short as something may be, the power of it can be great.