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cry me a river

cry me a river
 
 
 Flowing down one's pupil,
like drips of what I wish to forget.
 Like all the days you left me here
when I needed you by my side.
 
And the only thing you could ever do
was make me wish you weren't alive.
 
This time, I know we're over
 
As you glance my way and say to me,
"Cry me a river. We're through" 
 

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Pic Credit: http://psivamp.deviantart.com/art/Cry-Me-a-River-66486902

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    I like the layout of it and everything, nice and pretty to the idea. Oh, and the piece went along with it quite well I think! Very aesthetic!


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Wow!

    The pic is astounding and the poem breathtaking in it's imagery and emotions. Great work from you yet again....You never let me down. ~mandie~


  • movedon
    July 30, 2008

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    Defenitely well working with my situatuion and...yeah! Anyway, Very well penned piece my brother. I love the last stanza.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Lady Australis silver member
    July 30, 2008
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    sad but beautiful
    like always


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 30, 2008
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    well done here.
    Thanks so much for sharing.

    Love
    Passions

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