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an hourly check






an hourly check
on the bedroom door
restless wind





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  • sailor ptolema
    August 3, 2008

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    oh cool. I like idea of wind pushing open the door quietly, and I agree with what IrishGypsyRose says

    thanks for entering and g'luck.

    -sailor ptolema


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Sweet

    It makes me think of a new mother checking on her newborn child in the next room repeatedly because she is so afraid anything will happen. Great write. ~mandie~