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Once in a while

  Once in a while

I’ve been a bit “preoccupied” with the hallucinations in my head
You should not act “nonchalant” or you might just end up dead

Sometimes you need to be “discreet” about those “rabid” little thoughts
Try to “catalogue” the good from bad without being caught

During the brief "interlude” when my thoughts are changing around
Come again those “riotous” emotions and the tears that are abound

I have this strange “disorder” it come from “oval” and “curved” glass
Mix it with some “billowy” clouds and a red headed Irish lass

And you will find me “jaded”, my face “badious”, eyes closed tight
Then I feel “farouche” with a “lopsided” psyche lasting half the night

But in the morning I feel” zealous”, with a “succinct” manic flair
My eyes feel filled with “margaric”acid but no one seems to care

In the end the only treatment is to “abacinate” and rid me of my sight
But like I said it’s a” hallucination” that will only last one night

Author notes

Don't be mad I'm a rhymer I used prompt # 1 and used all on the list you did say to have fun they are shown in quotation marks there's so many. Bosiarbooger (sorry)

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 19, 2008
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    Great Rhyme and use of the word bank--A very humorous composition!
    Well Done!


  • quantumsurveyor
    July 31, 2008

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    I just love using wordbanks in toto, as you have done here, hard to make sense but you have done it in spades.. A red-headed Irish lass....OoooH!! I have always had the hots for redheads - you naughty booger.
    PS - I have never won a wordbank contest, what does that tell you?


  • TChaplinette
    July 30, 2008

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    ok...so i'm not mad.
    because this was excellent.

    and your amazing for using all of the words and not just the minimum.

    and it looks like you did have fun.

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    thanks for entering.
    and good luck.
    ♥taylor.