sneaking a surreptitious glance at
emerald nuances
stripped pinions of putrescence
beg to differ for a change
as a crescent of understanding
stands above fetid pride.
char the cellophane wrapping
and inhale incinerated fumes
as opaque plastic incarcerates unlamented
narcissism.
Author notes
41 words.
Prompt2: Untitled
Credit goes to BIRDY49
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Comments
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Ummm NICE! What a brilliant ending. Intelligent, edgy vocabulary. A really good write. Best of luck!
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thanks heaps for the comment/ compliments/ and trophy! I am so glad you liked it. it means a lot.
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