I step on the battlefield to hear my mother screaming
I feel the tears on her cheek and her internal bleeding
She's breaking out in cold sweats what is the meaning
Of this madness sanity is the only thing I'm seeking
I go back to C.T. and step into the burning inferno
I know I fucked up never thought my father would turn though
Ever since my failures his warm heart turned cold
So I'm going to set it on fire and watch it burn slow
My rifles and missiles are my words
My whole arsonal lies within my nerves
My battle cries hold a strange beauty like a mockinbirds
The thought of me losing is completely obsered
I say I'm going to rise, daddy don't beleive me
Well if your not with me than bicth deceive me
You don't hate me yet, well I'll make it easy
Bicth you will never be on my level you will never see me
See I'm 3 times better than you at the least
I'm never going to fall, never going to decease
You may be king of the house hold but I'm the beast
Your tears is my beverage and your ego is my feast
To my demon sister
She moved and I never missed her
No girl alive could ever be sicker
Shes the main source of my past problem with liqour
Shes the devil, she has all his features
Heart full of acid and soul full of ether
So much evil she would scare any preacher
She never loved me and I never did either
Mother I feel your heartbeat getting slower
As I hold you tight I feel your body getting colder
I told you things will get better as I get older
I promised you that this war will soon be over
But for now I have to be the curnal
I have to stay hotter than the devils infero
I have to breath in the gun smoke until I'm purple
I'll never have the heart to tell her this war is enternal
Author notes
I don't know what to say about this one. I can't put it into words so just tell me what you think
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. This is so intense and powerful. I couldn't tell you my favorite part of it - I loved the whole thing. Amazing write with amazing flow
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Yet another excellent write, it flowed nicely and the rhythem and rhyme was right on tempo. Nice job
Nicky -
wow i dont even know what to say its so amazing that i just might cry!!!!
and i dont think that anyone could really say that i know how you feel but i wish i did cause i dont even think i have that much feeling in me!!!!!!
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"Well if your not with me than bicth deceive me
You don't hate me yet, well I'll make it easy"
"She never loved me and I never did either"
"But for now I have to be the curnal
I have to stay hotter than the devils infero
I have to breath in the gun smoke until I'm purple
I'll never have the heart to tell her this war is enternal"
I'm so glad I finally read this.
Amazing.
Really.
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i'm not sure what to say. i'm speechless. this was way too powerful and increadable. just...wow.
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wow!
this was really really powerful! it was painful and filled with angst! a dark write, but the hurt in this is just too much to bear!
an intense and emotional write, keep penning kays! and keep the faith alive! 
~beauty of silence
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