Cotton pads
strewn and sprinkled
up in sky
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku's Here! by Age of Rain.
750 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now this is just plain cool!
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Thanks!
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I like this
Stars like cotton balls...quite the image in my mind right now. Good write. I enjoyed the flow and how it gave such great imagery.
~mandie~
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I was thinking more of clouds... but stars seem so much brighter!
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