Sweat moistened silk sheets
Two bodies cloaked in deception
Forever changed my perception
Disgusted, I attempted to flee
Any reality but this would be divine
But a foul stench blocked my escape
Suspended in motion and
Unaware of the previous commotions
Disturbing, the nature of his crimes
One shot... Two dead
Left in a rotting pool of disgust
Lovers still entangled in bliss
Orgasmic expression of their final hour.
Author notes
This was about my uncle... He walked in on his wife and tried to kill the man she was with but accidentally killed his wife too...
**A crime of passion**
2. Inspired by the title of this contest!
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YES
Yes,yes,yes.This is great,so very very great.
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wow! this is great!!! and orgasmic is one of my favorite words haha. but the peomm is brilliant i love it!
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