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Goodbye

as you are reading this
I'm probably on my way
to somewhere beyond this quite old town
to a place where I can be whoever I want to be

You might want to stop me
but don't even try
my  mind is made up
so I am afraid this means goodbye

I may not know where I am going
But I do know what I am doing
and if you are wondering what that is

I am chancing my dreams
going to make them realty
I never wanted it to end up like this
but this is just how it has to be
so I am leaving
and you can't stop me

I'll come back
when I find what I am looking for
So I guess this is
Goodbye

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  • DaniClover14
    August 1, 2008

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    oh my edward, kalyn this is amazing! actually i think i might know a person with lung cancer and i wish them the best! you are amazing!


  • mitchie
    July 31, 2008

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    yes my friends mom has.and she was like a second mom to me.and this poem shows feeling i like it a lot.