Here in the black pool of desire; lies a creature of lust holding beauty as her name, look into her eyes, be taken by the sweet spell of seduction; inhale her warm scent let all
senses be undone; wrap her slim line body within the folds of your arms; her eyes pleading for you take her flesh, Her Rosen lip hungering to taste your neck; the price of her flesh is
your life’s blood, are you prepared to pay the toll of the black pool of desire? For love is forever never to die with the sands of time, for she is the creature of the night, her kiss is eternity her love knows no end.
A contest entry
- Vampire Poems! by hazeleyedfreak.
600 points, ended August 30, 2008, 20 entries
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The poem is really good but the font is very hard to read. You may want to lighten it up just a touch so folks don't have to highlight
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Awe!!
This is nice!! I like how you wrote about love seemingly!! My favorite ines were:
For love is forever never to die with the sands of time, for she is the creature of the night, her kiss is eternity her love knows no end.
They appealed to me the most. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!!
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