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A classic poem about the hate for society

I am sick,
at deaths door
Poisoned by superficiality
consumerism
humanity
yours, mine
I am afebrile,
functioning,
not fine.

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  • Silverstar1993
    August 20, 2008

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    I despise humanity too. Sometimes I wish I were a tree instead. It's very deep and well written, with a very big vocabulary! Good Job!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 29, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I love the wording in this poem, it is very very well written and really enhances the poem and its depth.
    I can relate to this alot, as i despise humanity,

    All my love
    Brienna
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