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She Told Him At the Station

He was in the middle of a Happy Meal
outside McDonald’s when she walked
up.

They boarded the bus together.
Sat together.

She said she’d found a room. In her
girlfriend’s / father’s / professor’s
house.

And couldn’t have overnight guests.
He hadn’t asked about that.

When they got to the station she told
him she was back home to St Catharines.

To her true boyfriend.

That must have made him false, he
thought.

That must have made him.

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  • dame de la riviere
    July 29, 2008

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    I like that phrase: "That must have made him false..." You have such a nice way of putting swirling thoughts into words. , Dannie