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b-rated

am I so elated
that I bend my self to you

am I so jaded
to have thunderclouds roll through

am I so indifferent
I don't care the sky is blue

or'm I that faded
that I can't tell me
from you ?


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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 7, 2008
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    excellent flow and good rhyme scheme
    well crafted and written thoughts

  • ErroneousSage
    September 11, 2008
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    Thoughtful, Lovely

    Lovely heart...beautiful thoughts..kind, caring..
    very good poem