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the garden of eden

right wrong
true     false

what is 'my' creation ?
& what is being shown to me

  what of trust ?

were there no signs,
or was it common sense

Don't eat the fruit ???
I partook first,
they have it backwards

it was I who knew

now is paradise lost
or have i just discovered it ?

a little rough water, that's all !

"go to sleep now & it'll all be better
when u wake babe"

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  • ErroneousSage
    September 11, 2008
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    so human..so sweet

    Your'e the sweetest guy I know