A song i wrote recently. =]
You said you'd always be there to catch me
If i should ever fall
and that you'd never leave.
but like the ones who came before,
you just walked away.
Chorus:
I need a hero,
someone to save myself from me.
I need a hero,
someone who I know won't leave, (
someone who won't leave)
In my time of need.
verse 2:
We were the closest of friends
there till the end
a shoulder to cry on
through thick and thin
before all the secrets
before all the lies
you were my hero
you saved my life.
Chorus:
I need a hero,
someone to save myself from me.
I need a hero,
someone who I know won't leave, (
someone who won't leave)
In my time of need.
Chorus #2:
You were my hero
The one who saved myself from me.
You were my hero
the on that I thought wouldn't leave
In my time of need.
A contest entry
- Open Contest for Ages 10 - 16 :) by Veronica Leigh.
525 points, ended August 1, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Anything I Should Change?
Comments
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welcome to allpoetry
Great song you have here. I could just about the music for it in my mind as I was reading. I especially like the first stanza. Well done! Thank you for sharing your song.
Keep writing on.
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Wonderfully written and well thought out lyrics! Very nice job!
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very cool piece...I could picture this as a great song...great job!
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