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He'll tell you that you're beautiful & his only one

Then whisper in another's ear
when you're not around.

He'll hold your hand & promise
you f o r e v e r

but as soon as you prove
human...
someone new will be pursued & asked to lay down

He's easy to trust
Until he shows he is not

one girl or a other
"she's just a friend"

I love you flows so freely
from his silverly tongue

But be careful
there is poison in his
k i s s

If you're really lucky
he'll get down on 1 knee

The minute you do wrong tho
she'll be wearing your ring

He'll cradle you at nite
protection for a lifetime

Till you're at your weakest

&& in the end what he leaves you
is not a heart at all

But broken shattered pieces
that he'll sweep up to the trash
because you didn't matter at all

Author notes

About "the" ex again. It's been nearly a year since I've written. These are the first attempts since then. Working my way through the loss.

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  • darkstinger
    July 29, 2008

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    This poem was fucking BEAUTIFUL!!!! It flowed so nicely and freely that I loved i so much I had to read it twice. That it was me at the start, I love it. Keep it up.

    ray