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nature

I am the beauty on this earthly world
the touches of my hand and you evolve
naturalize mutants you love to create
Feel me in your heart and you will grow.

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  • TChaplinette
    August 15, 2008

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    that was really good,
    and i loved how you found a way to put the word mutants in there.


    thanks for entering
    and good luck.
    taylor.

  • carole21
    August 5, 2008

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    nice write for the prompt . . liked "I am the beauty on this earthly world" and "Feel me in your heart and you will grow" . . good first and last lines . . best of luck in the contest


  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 29, 2008
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    Fascinating, I am awed. Thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest lol


  • arafura gold member
    July 29, 2008
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    Very deep and thoughtful! Well written poet!