His righteous disorder,
and jaded heart,
Rabid with deceit.
A riotous hallucination,
Of her lopsided soul.
His nonchalance taints
her overzealous abandon.
Preoccupied in their interlude…
her farouche gaze,
disintegrates his billowy touch.
Author notes
Lotus-Mama
Prompt One:
word bank.
use at least 5.
interlude
preoccupied
disorder
farouche
hallucination
zealous
nonchalant
lopsided
jaded
billowy
rabid
Picture Credit: http://anything-goes.deviantart.com/art/Fingertips-54063808
A contest entry
- prompts & more prompts. by TChaplinette.
450 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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Great poem. I like the way you worked the words into your entry. Good luck on the contest.
Garrison
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Good poem!
I love the way you put all those words together!! Awesome job!
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that was really good.
i felt like you were sharing a secret with me.
i don't really know how to explain it, it just sounds so personal.
<3
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