Between laughs and stumbles
she sends me flirty winks
from the other side of her lens.
She is like a dream wandering
out of another atmosphere-
while my body drifts behind.
She is the only lover who
pulls my boots through the wind
to watch the moonlight dissolve
into her earthy brown orbs.
She, replenishes my bones-
To me she is... HOME.
Author notes
Dream/Image Prompt ~ Artist Is Unknown ~ Image was provided by contest holder...[12 Lines]
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From July 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2800 points, ended November 18, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I meant put in the tag to cancel the italics for the rest of the page please
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beautiful...but it please lol
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i enjoyed it between laughs and stumbles...
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Well done
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This is beautiful. I love the softness the italicizing lends to it, and I love the gorgeous imagery here. Thanks for entering and best of luck!
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I know this feeling so well. Great words.
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What a stunning piece!! You are definately good at going way outside the proverbial box and bringing forth a worthy masterpiece!! This was no exception!! Very well done and best wishes!!
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Excellent
Truly terrific creation based on the picture. So very well crafted. Best of luck in the contest.
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