I wish this pain
You left me with went away
I wish me and you
Could be one again
I wish you didn't fall for her because
She was only using you
I wish I could show you
How I feel about you deep down
I wish I didn't feel so left out
When all you did was talk about her
I wish I didn't get so jealous
So I can show you it doesn't bother me
I wish I could be your one and only
The one who takes away all your pain and sorrow
I wish I was your princess who made you smile
Like I did when we first met
I wish I could show you that your not alone
Because I'll always be by your side
I wish I could tell you how much you mean to me
But it always hard to explain
Because I won't know what you would think of me
Once I tell you
If only my wishes came true then
Everything can feel whole again
Author notes
the word I used for this poem was Wish
A contest entry
- What's Your Word? by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I like how you used the word "Wish".
Your poem shows emotion. I especially like the last two lines of your poem.
"If only my wishes came true then
everything can feel whole again."
Thanks for your entry.
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eep this is so sad!
>_<
i loved:
"I wish I didn't get so jealous"
[as i, also, can be a terribly jealous individual =P]
great work! -
This poem is so sad. :[ I love it though.
" I wish you didn't fall for her because
She was only using you
I wish I could show you
How I feel about you deep down"
I like these lines because they show the most emotion- to me anyway. I know how it feels to want to convince someone of how much better you could be for them. :[ But there's always hope of someone, so don't give up! I truly believe there is someone for everyone. :] There's too many people in the world for there not to be.
"I wish I could show you that your not alone
Because I'll always be by your side"
I like this a lot because it shows how dedicated you are to this person. How much you really care about them. :]
Good luck in my contest and thank you so much for entering. You've done wonderfully. :]
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