Your warm, ivory smile,
Illuminates my soul.
Your consoling arms,
Embrace my heart.
Your fragile words,
Seduce my mind.
~Passionate embers explode from your velvet touch~
One smile, to make me weak.
One touch, to make me shiver.
One kiss, and I'm yours forever.
Scarlet rose petals
And boxes of assorted chocolates,
Fill up your concrete porch.
Letters sent to your ceramic mailbox,
From the one who melts like wax with love.
Anonymously placed inside lavendar envelopes,
Sealed without a kiss..
From: Anonymous
Author notes
Contest:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2415965
Prompt 5 - Write a letter to your crush
http://michael1981.deviantart.com/art/the-love-that-I-lock-within-4040670
A contest entry
- prompts & more prompts. by TChaplinette.
450 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell Me What You Think!
Comments
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Very romantic. I really like this poem. It really shows such feelings. Excellent job.
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Anonymous.
Secret.
Admirer.
Beautiful write chikie.
Lovely imagery.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Great response to the prompt. Very sweet write. I especially like the lines,
Scarlet rose petals
And boxes of assorted chocolates,
Fill up your concrete porch.
Best of luck in the contest.
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A very tender view on live, very postive out look on it, mm some very beautiful adn creative lines about love.... keep writing
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that was kind of mushy.
i don't mean to be harsh, but that was like you stole it from a chick flick.
i did like the line,
"Your fragile words,
Seduce my mind."
i thought that was very powerful.
thanks for entering.
and good luck.
♥taylor. -
Wow I think you did a good job darling I wish you much luck in the contest best wishes and much love always
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